Monday, December 14, 2009

Honors History Writing #4: A Personal History

1. This semester has been rather successful for me. I turned in every single honors essay and did pretty well on all of them. My current grade in this class is an A-, and I hope my final grade will end up the same.

2. I would definitely have spent more time on the essays to get A's. My highest essay grade was a B, but I think that if I had tried harder I would've gotten better grades. I would utilize my class time better and turn in all of my assignments on time. That was really the only reason I don't have a higher A.

3. My goals are simple: continue to work hard, but improve my effort overall. If I can just do that, it will be relatively easy to keep my head above water next semester.

4. I would really like to explore the 90's, but I know that could only happen in a dream world. Or college. But I've also been interested in the Cold War era for a while. It just seems like there isn't much coverage of the Cold War.

Thursday, December 10, 2009

Blog Assignment #29: Nature Writing Complete

There are a lot of different qualities required to climb Mt. Everest. One needs to be physically strong, able to rappel up mountains like a spider monkey up a tree, grip a vertical wall of rock with a miniscule amount of footholds and survive conditions more extreme than any average human would ever face. The amount of training required to take on such a task is astounding and is enough to turn just about anyone off to the thought of scaling this monstrous block of a mountain. Yet, in Jon Krakauer’s Into Thin Air, it becomes apparent that there is much more to this feat than just pumping iron at the gym or running laps around the block. One must be self-motivated, yet cannot let his selfish desires overtake him or let his emotions get in the way of his success.

One of the many requirements to be a climber of Mt. Everest is a goal. The climber must have something driving him that isn’t money, fame, wealth or anything material. There needs to be a self-motivation, a fire inside. Krakauer confides in the reader about how he feels his team is not up to the task of climbing Everest. Because of all the struggle a climber must go through to reach the summit, there’s no way that a nonchalant climber could possibly make it. Fame—or a story in a magazine—isn’t enough to make someone want to summit Everest. It has to come from the heart, which is something Krakauer lost for a long time. Fortunately, the magazine article caused him to regain the fire necessary to make it to the top.

Emotions are another thing that could possibly get in the way of summiting Everest. When people get caught up in their emotions, they tend to act irrationally. They also tend to turn to an ‘every man for himself’ mentality, which, when applied to something as risky as a Mt. Everest climb, could lead to tragedy. For example, in chapter thirteen, Krakauer notices that the climbers are so caught up in summiting that they continue to climb and climb, not caring that they have various health problems and could very easily run out of oxygen before they reach the top. But, since they have each paid so much money to be on this trip, they keep going and going. Another example is Boukreev’s stupidity. As a guide, it should be his job to carry extra oxygen and supplies. Yet, because of his selfish goals and determination to meet them, he puts himself and others in jeopardy.

Finally, the camaraderie between the climbers might act as a road block in some instances. During the descent, Krakauer notices that guide Andy Harris is suffering from hypoxia—but not before Harris depletes all of Krakauer’s supplemental oxygen. It is a tough decision for Krakauer to make, but he decides that Hall is a lost cause and leaves him 28,000 feet up the mountain. This decision could quite possibly inhibit Krakauer’s success in reaching the foot of the mountain and finishing his descent. Luckily, it didn’t, but because Harris and Krakauer had become friends (or at least acquaintances) during the trip it was a risk factor. The best thing to do for such a dangerous trip might be to adopt the ‘every man for himself’ mentality, but as stated above, that may also lead to disaster. The only real way to completely avoid the possibility death on Mt. Everest is just staying on the ground.

Obviously there is more to climbing than just physical strength. Sure, many of the climbers on that expedition may have been in top physical form, but their own aspirations, emotions and motives stopped them from performing at their best. If they had been more level-headed and had taken more precautions against illness and the like, much of the tragedy that occurred on Everest could have been avoided.

Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Blog #28: Nature Writing

Thesis: Mental strength is more important than physical strength because it keeps the climber from making irrational decisions and possibly killing themselves or others.

Much of what happened on Jon Krakauer's expedition could have been avoided if people had just kept their heads. For example, Anotoli is so intent on meeting his own goals and attaining his own achievements that he completely disregards the other climbers and goes almost solo to the summit. He had a case of "summit fever" and it cost the team dearly. He did not do everything he could to save the other members of his team, even though that's what he agreed to by going on the trip.

Another example is Rob Hall. He gave up so fast that he just curled up into a ball and waited for death. Maybe his physical strength was up to the task 9which, as it happens, it wasn't) but he obviously did not have the mental capabilities required to climb with so many people.

The final example is Krakauer himself. Krakauer was able to control his feelings and emotions and not get caught up in reaching the summit. If it weren't for his incredible self control he could have just as easily been killed or seriously injured while climbing Everest.

Friday, December 4, 2009

Blog Assignment #27: Nature Writing

Into Thin Air

1. Mental strength is incredibly important when climbing because one has to be able to take extreme pain and push oneself beyond his limits. It could even be said that it isn't as important as physical strength. Sure, the climber must be in top physical form to be able to perform such a feat, but the mental strength he must possess can keep him alive much longer. However, if one is emotionally unstable (i.e. he is easily angered) then disaster can strike. Or, if one is over-confident in his abilities, he may expect too much of the others, get careless and a host of other things. This can put himself and others in jeopardy.

3. It seems as though Krakauer should be allowed to criticize Anotoli. ANotoli was very selfish and didn't seem to think of anything but climbing Everest without supplemental oxygen. Krakauer was on schedule, and may have even been a bit ahead of schedule. He made it down to Camp 3 by the time everything went down. In my opinion, Krakauer was very well-qualified and deserves to criticize the actions of the inexperienced climbers and even the group leaders. He survived, they didn't. Anotoli, however, believes he has rights because he went back for the people who were trapped, but Krakauer doesn't believe he did everything in his power. I agree.

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Blog #26: Professioanl Exhibition? Contest?

A Singular Creation is a website for hosting art. They hold contests monthly and award cash prizes/

http://www.asingularcreation.com/sell-art-online-free.htm

Since it is online, I can showcase my art forever with no fees. It also means my art won't be removed after a certain time period, and I can reach many more people.